Why do people overlook the value of appearance as evaluation measure? (외모의 중요성에 대한 essay)

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외모의 중요성에 대한 short essay입니다. 대학교에서 가장 많이 쓰이는 essay형식입니다. 주제도 사형제도 폐지, 한국의 자살율 같은 진부하지 않은 외모의 중요성으로 아주 참신한 주제로 썼습니다. 완벽하게 Introduction-hook, background information, limiting statement, thesis statement, 그리고 3개의 Body paragraph- topic sentence with controlling idea, examples with supporting ideas, concluding sentence, 그리고 Conclusion-recap of thesis statement, recap of each structure, evaluation and strong impression/final thought.의 정형화된 원어민에게 배운 양식 그대로 썼기때문에 이름만 바꿔서 내시면 A+는 쉽게 받을실 수 있으실 겁니다. 저도 essay로 A+ 받았습니다. 감사합니다.

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Among OECD countries, the percentage of employed youth is the lowest. According to Incruit's survey about the reason why you don't be chosen, one of the job referral service website, although there were many causes, the biggest reason was "the boss judged of me by appearance and doesn't know my real value(63%)". Like this, normal people think the real thing that we can evaluate is not externals but the inside. Their opinion isn't wrong, but appearance is as valuable as inner side. Because appearance is an way to identify a person and have courtesy and know personality.

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