영작문 과제로 존중에 대해 에세이 쓰는 거였습니다~

소개

영작문 과목 마지막 과제 였고 전체적 주제는 존중이었고 그 중에서 전
결혼생활에서의 여자와 남자는 서로 어떻게 존중하나
에 대해서 에쎄이 썼습니다. 원래 draft 3까지 쓰는 거였는데 draft 1 만에
100점 맞고 교수님에게서 excellent 라는 칭찬 받았습니다 ㅎ
descriptive 하고 comparison , simile 등 지루하지 않게 쓴 라이팅입니다.

목차

서론- hook(독자의 관심을 끄는 부분입니다) Buddha 의 quotation 인용, thesis statement (앞으로 무엇을 얘기할건지 한 문장으로 마지막 줄에 표현)
본론 - body 1- 결혼 관계에서 존중
body 2 - 결혼에서 존중 예
body 3 - 결혼에서 존중 예
각각의 body 는 topic sentence 를 가지고 있고 그 topic sentence에서 벗어나지 않는 내용으로 구성.
closing- setting little punching. (hook 을 다시 상기시키면서 마무리)

본문내용

“You should respect each other and refrain from disputes; you should not, like water

and oil, repel each other, but should, like milk and water, mingle together,” Buddha quotes.

Every respective human being in the world retains his own robust individuality, causing it

greatly challenging for people to mingle as one. However, people are favorably expected to

be combined together in every place in a society; a president and people, a teacher and

students, employers and employees, a pastor and the flock, a producer and actors. By only

merging into a singular feature, they could effectively create and build one outstanding effect

at the end. Leading a company to be brilliantly remarkable would only be accomplished by

successive attempt of both employers and employees of the company. A president of a

country and the people will efficiently establish the nation to a greater degree if they progress

toward the same direction simultaneously.





her husband can clean the house and prepare dinner for her. When she takes a day off during
a week, she can cook some exquisite dishes for her husband. When deciding on some specific
matters, for example, related to their children, husband and wives should discuss about the
issue together. A decision should not be created by one person. Husband and wives should
express how much they both appreciate their partners’ remarkable effort saying “Thank you
for doing this”, “I really appreciate it” exchanging views on
this with you.”

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