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Firstly, Internet real name system is harmful for Korean society because freedom of speech cannot be protected.
Supporting Area: 1
Transition Word: First,

Supporting Idea: People have right to advocate his or views anonymously and thereby without fear of the authorities' oppression or social prejudices.

Information: in other countries, freedom of speech has been protected as a core part of democracy, which is also protected under Article 21 of the Korean Constitution

Supporting Area: 2
Transition Word: Second,

Supporting Idea: It directly contradicts the mandate that one should not be penalized
for exercising a right guaranteed by the Constitution (namely, freedom of speech).

Information: The mandatory identity verification system also imposes a legal obligation (to verify their identities) on people for the sole reason that they engage in on-line writing

Supporting Area: 3
Transition Word: Finally,

Supporting Idea: It provides for a penalty against the act of on-line writing pure and simple and is therefore unconstitutional.

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