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Every family should raise a pet
“Animals are such agreeable friends-they ask no questions and they pass no criticisms” said George Eliot who was a writer. Some people think the raising a pet just makes a nuisance of themselves. However, I believe that raising a pet gives a good influence to people’s lives. This is because pets enable people to keep healthy body, help people to develop a sense of responsibility, and make them relieve stress.
First of all, pets make people much healthier by increasing exercise.

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