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서울로 이사와서 나의 어린 시절.
오빠들과 공놀이를 하고, 남동생이 거짓말해서 3형제가 집에서 쫒겨난 에피소드
피아노를 배우고 싶어서 교회에 갔던 경험.. 등을 에피소드를 바탕으로 글을 써서
재미있습니다.

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본문내용

I had a very extraordinary childhood. We moved to Seoul from Jeju when I was 6. I tried to recall any childhood memories, when was an infant. I can’t. So, I’d like to begin this essay with my 2 brothers. I usually spent a surprisingly large amount of my time with them. Without them, my childhood could not exist at all. We all went to same middle and high school. We all were bright students and the presidents in each class so we were well-known to teachers and classmates.
(중략)

On Sundays, I looked forward to going to church only for PIANO. One day, priest overheard my playing gospel songs, he asked me to be an accompanist in church. After that, I could know that I definitely do well whatever I’m interested in after thousands practices. How did I master playing the piano by myself? First of all, I’m grateful to have a chance to encounter the love of God through music. There is no sad story about my childhood now that I’m grown up. I feel really happy to recollect my childhood that I miss so much.

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