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English Writing 수업에서 Midterm Essay로 제출했던 Essay입니다.
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I don't think Osan is a city attractive to people my age. So from one point in, I found myself talking about meeting another region when friends wanted to come Osan. But if there are some changes, I think Osan will be a city attractive enough to my age group. Here are three improvement points of Osan.
First, Osan needs a department store. People my age is very interested in clothes, watches, cosmetics, and so on.

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