Argumentative 에세이- 왜 대마초가 합법화 되어야 하는가

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영어 에세이에서 가장 까다로운 주장글(Argumentative Essay)입니다.
서양국가에서 관심이 많은 마리화나(Marijuana, 대마초)의 합법화를 찬성하는 주장을 담았습니다.

본문 첫 번째 단락(Body1)에서는 현재 불법인 대마초가 합법인 담배보다 덜 해롭다는 과학적 사실로 대마초 불법화를 주장하는 담배회사의 주장을 반박합니다.
본문 두 번째 단락(Body2)에서는 현재 재배와 사용이 전부 불법인 대마초를 합법화 할 경우 의료적으로, 경제적으로, 마약중독을 예방하는 목적으로 큰 이점이 있음을 주장합니다.

영어 에세이의 필수요소인
Thesis, Topic Sentense, Controlling Ideas, Summary & Final Comment, Reference
를 빠지지 않고 포함한 하나의 잘 짜여진 글입니다.

다음과 같은 분들께 도움이 될 것 같습니다!
주장 에세이를 급하게 제출해야 하시는 분
영어 에세이 작성이 처음이신 분
영어로 된 글 작성 요령을 공부하시고 싶으신 분

목차

1. Introduction

2.Body
1) 과학적 데이터에 따르면 합법인 담배가 불법인 대마초보다 오히려 더 해롭다.
1-1. 대마초에는 담배와 달리 발암물질이 없다.
1-2. 대마초에는 담배와 달리 중독물질이 없다.
1-3. 대마초가 합법화 되어야지 안전한 대마초 상품을 만들 수 있다.

2) 대마초 합법화의 근거
2-1. 암치료 목적의 대마초 사용은 아편사용을 줄일 수 있다
2-2. 합법적으로 소비되는 대마초에 세금을 매겨 큰 세수 이익을 얻을 수 있다
2-3. 합법적으로 유통되는 대마초로 다른 위험한 마약의 중독을 막을 수 있다

3. Conclusion

4. Reference

본문내용

Introduction

During 1920s, the U.S. government prohibited the production, sale, and purchase of alcohol, which was known as the Prohibition Era. The use of prohibition cannot suppress the citizen to drink alcohol, but promoted the citizen to drink alcohol illegally. As an outcome of the prohibition, Mafia smuggled liquor from Mexico and Canada governing the states of boarders with Mexico such as Chicago, where homicide and political corruption were rampant. Even worse, the illegally produced alcohol disturbed the health of citizens who drink it. The low-grade liquor from unverified factories often contained methanol which resemble the chemical structure of ethanol, the main substance of normal liquor, but can damage fertility, optic nerves, and central nerves, leading to death in severe cases. Therefore, the prohibition was abandoned because of its critical side-effects.

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