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토픽은 What are 3 things you can do to make your life longer and healthier? 이구요.

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The more medical care and society are developed, the more people are interested in living longer and healthier. Recently, many people want to live longer with strong bodies and minds. Here are some suggestions to improve your life. Doing exercise is the best way to be healthy. Furthermore, you should keep away from harmful things and have optimistic mind.
First, exercise improves your health. Lots of research proved that the people who exercise regularly live longer than the people who do not exercise. There is no doubt about it. Doing physical activity make people stronger and refresh them. Also, people who like exercise do not get particular diseases easily. However, be cautious. You need to exercise regularly if you want to live longer. Regular exercise every day is better than too much exercise in one day.

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