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emphasis on personal appearance and fashion.

As everyone recognizes the importance of appearance, many young people say that investing in their feature is natural. They believe that most important thing is adorning and also decorating themselves. From my point of view ,however, these young people`s opinions are based on very excessive interest. The rational behind this is that they spend a lot of amount of time and money and have a tendency to judge people by their appearance.

To start with, nowadays people waste huge amount of time on decorating their appearance. In particular, we can easily find these people among young women.

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