A+ 영어 에세이 [Comparison Essay]-Bill Gates and Steve Jobs

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총 글자수 : 400 단어 내외 (A4 2장 분량)
에세이 유형 : Comparison Essay [비교 분석 글쓰기]
주제 : 전세계 IT 산업의 쌍두마차 Bill Gates 와 Steve Jobs의 비교

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[Comparison Essay] - Bill Gates and Steve Jobs

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Bill Gates and Steve Jobs
Who do you think is the most popular and influential person in the information technology industry? Obviously, many people would immediately think of the names Bill Gates and Steve Jobs, and, certainly, there are few who are unaware of the world’s two most successful business leaders. Bill Gates and Steve Jobs were both born in the United States of America in 1955, and they founded their own companies. However, several differences exist in their backgrounds, personalities, and success factors.
One of the most obvious differences between Bill Gates and Steve Jobs is their family backgrounds. Bill Gates was brought up in a wealthy family in Seattle. His father was a lawyer. Thanks to a stable home environment, Bill Gates could experience various things such as computers and cars. In 1975, Bill Gates co-founded Microsoft with his childhood friend, Paul Allen. Steve Jobs, in contrast, was born in unfortunate circumstances to an unmarried mother and was adopted at birth. In addition, Steve Jobs was a troublemaker during his school days, and his school records were mediocre. In 1976, he established Apple Inc. with Steve Wozniak.

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