Essay Writing - for TOEFL preparation

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어학연수시절에 작성한 글입니다. A받은 작문
Internet 의 장점과 단점 중에 장점을 부각하여 주장한 글입니다.
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The development of computer and network technology has changed our lives totally from the lives of our fathers and mothers. We are likely using email instead of handwriting letters, and internet newspapers are more popular than paper newspapers among young people. Although some problems have also been raised with it as people have used internet more and more, it seems that we are addicted to the internet with its many advantages for people.

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