[영작문] (영작문) The Negative Effects of Part-time Jobs

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1. I don't think it is a good idea for students to work
2. Education is difficult and complex
3. having part-time gobs interrupts home life
4. student may miss out on the fun of his time
5. final thoughts

본문내용

These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects.
First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day.

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