[영작문] 기업예산경감 방안과 제품개선안
- 최초 등록일
- 2002.11.14
- 최종 저작일
- 2002.11
- 4페이지/ 한컴오피스
- 가격 1,000원
소개글
제가 직접 쓰고 원어민에게 첨삭까지 받은 글입니다.
모쪼록 많은 도움이 되길 바랍니다.
목차
1. How to improve our product
2. How to reduce our budget
본문내용
Hi, everyone. I'm Park. Thank you for participating our presentation.
We have discussed how to improve our product. I suggest that we should improve our
product in several parts; color, battery and multi-players.
First, Pro Golf is very monotonous on their screen. It just used a one color; black.
It caused that our customers felt to be bored because players continually saw almost
similar screens. So, I suggest that we had better make our product more colorful like
portable TV. The improvement will be able to bring a situation as if the player were in
golf field.
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