argument essay
- 최초 등록일
- 2012.01.06
- 최종 저작일
- 2011.12
- 4페이지/ MS 워드
- 가격 1,500원
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목차
1. introduction
: include Thesis statement.
2. Body
1) reason
2) reason
3) reason
3. Conclusion
: include a summary of my point of view.
본문내용
We should use Avatar on the internet.
Every days, over tens of millions people are using avatars on the internet. Through avatar, they can press their feeling, personality, ideas. In other words, avatar represents person who use an avatar. Some people want to use real names on the internet because they think that others write abuse using avatar. However, if we use real name, we can’t preserve our privacy. Moreover, many people can’t talk with their opinions without interferences. What are advantages to be utilized avatar?
First, many people need to protect their privacy. How many people use the internet? Uncountable many people all over the world utilize computers. While if we use the real name, our ID numbers can be hacking by other users. In addition they are able to use the ID numbers. For example, hacker can sell our ID numbers to the illegal aliens. Also our personal information can leak to other people by hacking. In 2011, privacy information of over thirty five hundred people in Korea had leaked on the internet. So, if we utilize the avatar, we can be safeguarded from exposing our data.
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